Evaluation of CATW

 The essay gives us a summary of the article and it talked about the authors most important idea of the article.  The essay also gave outside experience of the need people have to get a new phone because it is the modern thing to do. I think that the essay makes it clear that the student understands the ideas of the article and that the author's most important idea is that advertisements are shown everywhere and that it is polluting everyone's mind. There were a few mistakes most of them were spelling, but the language use were good. The student essay was good and I think that this essay will pass.